OMG Nepal ko chora,

kasto tragic story. real ho?

lau na, malai ta kasto maya lagyo dubaiko...

1^st I thought it’s a story.

2^nd did you write it ?   ( of course you did what a fool)  you’r possessed of bahumukhi pratiba  nkchora.

3^{rd and last} sad but nice poem.. reminded me of a Victorian poem “lady of shalott”

write more!

nepal ko chora,

A sad story but so nicely described and sketched. I felt sorry for both.  

NKC, wow, that's such a beautiful poem. A sad one but beautifully written.

We dun need more words to describe a story , some few words steals the show . Good one!!

CL,

Fortunately, it's not real...just an imagination..

 

Pjna007,

Thanks for the complement. The poem is inspired from "Romeo and Juliet".

 

Dipika02, Sndy and Waiyat,

Thank you very much for the comments.

i ve read this before

long time.

Angeleyes ("Bhanji"), You must have read it at my "facebook" note then .. lol

 

 

Wow, this is a real nice and wonderful read! Loved it. My first thought was, he probably copied it from somewhere because the poem flows and conveys the whole story in a few words! Very well done sir, please write more.

Rhytm,

I would try my best to justify your praise in my other ramblings too. I am inbedted for the compliment from one of the best story-tellers from sajha... Haven't read any story from you for a while...hope you soon come up with a bang.  

ohhh hahaha

uncle

thats why i was like

nepal ko chora didnt really come to me as you

arrgh.. i almost sent u an email about the copyright thing kasam

i know u wrote it long time before

dat was awesome. havnt read new one these days? how u been?

Lovely!!!!

It's wonderfully written. Aru pani jaaosh :D

good job writing it man! i just love it!