When I read it again, I found too many flaws in this story with continuity, characters, and dialogues. I intend to edit it when I have some free time. Once I finish editing, I will post it again.

 

Peeked into this particular thread by sheer boredom and the first few lines juss grabbed at me. Do please keep writing. And in pure Sitara fashion..stick your name to the thread..for the readers in us all. Some threads are better peeked into than others,methinks. Kudos to you.
PS* I cud feel the bone piercing cold of early morn Ktm in the dead of winter.

gone with the wind..

as someone else suggested i think its time u get an editor and start writing professionally. dude u are so good. i especially love your narrations and totally identifiable characters. u r are for prime time. good luck and plz keep posting more of your wonderful fictions. by the way i am great fan of your days in nepal too

Loved it. Sum off bro hows bhauju? Are you keeping her cosy in this winter? YOu may end up losing much more than your jacket you know.